Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Welcome to a show! - by Oatt 10M

Welcome to a show!

Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to our circus show! Here you'll enjoy different kinds of shows. We got talking parrots, jumping through fire by lions, a big show from big elephant, and more! You don’t need to be worry about the show because all of our animals are well trained. We have lots of professional trainers from all over the world that could train our animals to perform many fantastic shows. We also made sure that our performers are living in good condition with good quality foods. It’s now a time for a show to start, please clap your hands to welcome our first show for tonight!

Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to our circus show! We’re poor animals that being captured by cruel men. We live in small boxes unlike what we used to be freedom in the forest. We must do as they want in order to get foods and survive. Our dear friends the parrots must sing ugly songs, and young lions must play with fire, or even grandpa elephant must act dead. So please, please clap your hands for our toughness.

We’re ladies and gentlemen, all we have to do is just sit down and enjoy the show. Of course we paid for it so if they mess up we would complain. We’ll clap our hands now to being this delight show.

By Korawit Kittipalawattanapol (Oat)

*Note: I decided you change some part of my story due to grammar error corrected by Pat and Nuey. Also, I tried to make the story simpler that it could be easier to understand. I hope you like it.

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